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Why do you wish to study in Canada in the program for which you have been accepted?
North American Universities are all accredited in Iran, and Canada has one of the best educational systems among the most famous universities all around the world. I believe, for me it is a great opportunity to study in Canada especially in Concordia University under supervision of Prof. Suong Van Hoabecause it is an opportunity which can help meto improve the academic and practical knowledge that I need in my country to besuccessful. Furthermore,being graduated from Canada would certainlyhelp me to find a prosperous work position in my country. It definitely would be my honor to continue my studies in Mechanical Engineering (Master of Science) under supervision of Prof. Suong Van Hoa.