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How can I make this more natural? According to the outrageous view of the rich class during the 1800s, the poor are responsible for the devastating conditions they are in, predominantly due to their laziness.
May 18, 2013 2:38 PM
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According to the outrageous views of the rich class during the 1800s, the poor were responsible for their devastating condition, caused predominantly by their own laziness. ^ that's what I'd go with. Yours is already close to perfect though.
May 18, 2013
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