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Jessiewyq
Can you please check if my below sentence is correct? thanks In today’s globalized world, people are often influenced by celebrity weddings either through TV or magazines, which inspires them to dream the similar luxurious wedding day.
May 21, 2013 5:51 AM
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In today’s globalized world, people are often influenced by celebrity weddings either through TV or magazines. This inspires them to dream of a similar luxurious wedding day for themselves.
May 21, 2013
(a) It's a bit long. Perhaps break it into two? (b)dream of a similar luxurious wedding day (or probably better) dream of a similar luxurious wedding of their own one day.
May 21, 2013
Jessiewyq
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