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learned that? is this sentence right A reporter learned that this great event has gathered lots of experts, including XXX, XXX, and other domestic experts in the domain of porcelain, painting and calligraphy, bronze and jewelry.
May 29, 2013 6:41 AM
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Everything sounds okay to me except for the last list of things sounds slightly awkward. Maybe you can say "and other domestic experts who specialize in porcelain, bronze, jewelry, painting, and calligraphy."
May 29, 2013
From my point of view, has gathered you must change in had gathered, because the fiest verb in past simple here
May 29, 2013
Sarah
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Spanish
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English, Spanish