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nguyenthihaiyen
please help me make this sentence more fomal in a more idiomatic style. However, if developing countries are not capable of tackling with this problem, it is reasonable for the west to aid them because keeping our world undamaged is the desire of every single individual no matter where he is.
Feb 24, 2014 5:31 PM
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"However, if developing countries are not capable of tackling this problem, it is reasonable to expect aid from the West. Keeping our world undamaged is a common desire of every individual, no matter their origin." I debated changing "tackling with this problem" to "tackling with these problems" but I am unsure of the the context (and amount of problems). I also broke up the sentence from keeping it running too long. Hope I helped!
February 24, 2014
nguyenthihaiyen
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