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Is this short story OK? I slipped and feel in the sea. I was really lucky because there wasn't too strong current. I made it back to shore.
Mar 4, 2014 3:15 AM
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A few corrections: You wrote: I slipped and feel in the sea. I slipped and *fell into* the sea. You wrote: I was really lucky because there wasn't too strong current. Better would be either: I was really lucky because *the current* wasn't too strong. or: I was really lucky because there wasn't too strong *of* a current. You wrote: I made it back to shore. [This sentence is good :), no need for correction. Good use of "made it back"]
March 4, 2014
Pelin
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