Hi, Groups.:)
It's been ages since I saw you here.
Your pronounciation and accent are almost perferct except for the "ㅍ" sound as in "파도여".
The first "파도여" sounds like "바도여" at least to me, but second and third one are pretty accurate.
I guess you've got "물밑의 속삭임" now.
\^o^/