Sarah
anyone check my long sentence.? many thanks In order to prepare for the third Sichuan civilized city's public investigation and to display the overall civilized quality and imange of star-rated tourist restaurants in Xingwen county, three measurements conducted by star restaurants in Xingwen county actively made propaganda for establishing a provincial and civilized city, which acquired great effect and created strong atmosphere.
Aug 5, 2014 11:41 AM
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It is not easy to rewrite your sentence without the context ( what is a "civilised city" in current Chinese politics?) . One danger with too much in a sentence is that it becomes difficult to follow the meaning. It is better to divide what you want to say into more than one sentence. In order to prepare for the third Sichuan civilized city's public investigation, and to display the overall civilized quality and image of star-rated tourist restaurants in Xingwen county, three measurements(surveys? or polls?) conducted by these restaurants in Xingwen county actively made the case for establishing a provincial and civilized city. which acquired great effect and created strong atmosphere.- here I am not sure of your meaning - what you are trying to say. My guess at it would be: The results of these (surveys) were very influential in creating strong support for their case.
August 5, 2014
You should write a notebook entry if you want to find out your mistakes.
August 5, 2014
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