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Do the following sentences make sense? "Surgical Alteration" Hi, this is just review my own study..do the following sentences make sense? I would greatly appreciate your help with my sentences.. 1) I often encounter those people who had undergone plastic surgery to make their faces look younger or to make their boobs look bigger. 2) I often encounter those people who have had boob job done. It's nothing out of the ordinary at some coastal areas in California. 3) I can tell from their faces if they underwent surgical alteration stuff like rhinoplasty, lip augmentation or Botox injections in their foreheads. Thanks in advance.
Aug 8, 2014 2:45 AM
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Some corrections...No need for "those" in "those people." Also, if you are aware, "boob" is very casual and offensive in polite groups. Instead of "boob job" you can also use a more polite term "breast augmentation". Instead of "boob" you can also use more politely "breast." Ex. - "...or to make their breasts look bigger. " Ex. - "...people who have had breast augmentation done." ------------ Corrections: 1) I often encounter people who have undergone plastic surgery to make their faces look younger or to make their boobs look bigger. 2) I often encounter people who have had a boob job done. It's nothing out of the ordinary in some coastal areas of California. 3) I can tell from their faces if they underwent surgical alteration, stuff like rhinoplasty, lip augmentation or Botox injections in their foreheads.
August 8, 2014
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