Emily
Who can help me? I'm so worried about my Writing Task. I wonder whether the states below are proper or not? Thank you sooo...much! Ads produced by super stars undoubtfully have a great reflect on selling products. But those ads seem have flowery phrases that exaggerate the efficacy of products, which are less credible and less scientific. Sometimes customers are misleading to buy these goods without consideration resulting in detrimental effects on their health. There was a report that some people bought a kind of losing-weight medicine responded by a famous person then suffered from the renal failure.
Aug 14, 2014 1:37 AM
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Ads produced by super stars undoubtfully have a great EFFECT on selling products; but those ads seem have flowery phrases that exaggerate the efficacy of products, which are less credible and less scientific. Sometimes customers are MISLEAD to buy these goods without consideration, resulting in detrimental effects on their health. There was a report that some people bought a kind of weight-loss medicine ENDORSED by a famous person, AND AFTERWARD THEY n suffered from renal failure.
August 14, 2014
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