I was born in 1989 and I've been studying graphic design for about two years. I would like to improve my skills in the field, and I wonder if you'd be willing to help me to become a professional in the industry.

I was born in 1989 and I've been studying graphic design for about two years. I hope to improve my skills in this field, and I wonder if you'd mind helping me to achieve a professional level in this field. (You should post sentences or paragraphs to be corrected in the "Notebook" section, so we have tools to correct it more easily)