Please. I wish these five sentence would be corrected.
 Although we could not communicate with words, our eyes did all the talking and filled our time intense emotion.
The insertion of 'all' in this sentence seem awkward to me. What does 'all' mean in this?
I know 'do the talking' just means 'talk', right?
 You've grown much stronger. Though you're but a human, it was an impressive battle.
It says "you're but a human" The insertion of 'but' seems unnatural to me. Do you think it is natural or just a typo?
Shouldn't it be 'just' or 'only' instead of 'but'?
 You are the only hope we have left at this point.
Is it correct and natural?
 Whatever the reason may be, you once shared the same ideology as us.
Q. I wonder if this sentence is correct.
Because I think it should be "you once shared the same ideology with us" or "you once shared the same ideology as ours" What do you think?
 I politely requested for this woman to be a model for my drawing.
Please correct this if any mistakes founded.