Incisive_Rapier
please check my grammar error . Our life is like an empty bottle under leaky faucet , every day passes from our life Followed by new day , new hopes & new dreams , every second passes a drop of water substitute for some of air inside the bottle , days & seconds pass away till our life also is going to end & water reaches it’s bottle neck which our dreams are inside , unfortunately not all our dreams can swim , some sink down, making their way to the dark depth, the torrent may cause it to Float to the surface once again to take it’s last inhale and make it’s way again to the bottom , now the residual are trying to stay float but wait , the level of water is going higher & higher , now the bottle is filled with water ,no air & also our life has no more new days , but the faucet is still leaky & the bottle is still there , do you remember the dreams that were trying to stay float there , it were afraid to sink in the water but it forget to fear from air , now it fell from the top to the ground .
Nov 29, 2014 3:44 PM
Answers · 1
You should post this in the Notebook section. It is long and too had to correct here.
November 29, 2014
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Incisive_Rapier
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