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Please correct these sentences 1. My husband is too kind and indulgent towards me, he performs every my whim, I can't claim more over. 2. She inflicts pain and suffer her relatives and she regrets now. 3. What boldness? How do you dare to say such offensive words. 4. I envy my granny, she had a great patience. 5. I always boast my achievements. 6. I certainly know that I can always rely on my husband and parents. 7. The main distinction compared my close friend: she is an altruist, I love myself and everything that connected with me. 8. This situation propelled her to claim a divorce. 9. She fulfilled everything that was required of her company. 10. She never feels remorse towards other, that were offended by her.
Jun 3, 2015 1:05 PM
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1. My husband is too kind and always indulges me, he caters to my every whim. I couldn't ask for more. 2. She inflicts pain and suffering on her relatives but she regrets it now. 3. How rude? How dare you say such offensive words. 4. I envy my granny, she has great patience. 5. I always boast of my achievements. 6. I know for certain that I can always rely on my husband and parents. 7. The main difference between my close friend I is that she is an altruist whereas I love myself and everything that's connected with me. 8. This situation propelled her to ask for a divorce. 9. She fulfilled everything that was required of her by her company. 10. She never feels remorse towards those she offendeds.
June 3, 2015
I'll do the first one. 1. My husband is too kind and indulgent towards me. He acts on my every whim. I couldn't ask for more. A lot of your language is very formal however the context is quite informal - talking about relationships. For example, a more informal and natural variation for 1. could be: "My husband is sometimes too kind to me. He does everything I ask him to. I really couldn't ask for a better husband." I can imagine a wife saying this in real life. I recommend finding dialogues to listen to and read for informal contexts like this one. You will pick up more natural language in that way. Keep up the good work!
June 3, 2015
Yljaha
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