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HEY HELP NEEDED hey ,dear friends here ,i have a speech contest soon ,and i just finished my paper ,can anyone help me to revise it a littlt bit?reallyyyyy appreciate it a lot!!!!!!!! COMPARE THEE TO A SUMMER DAY Ladies and gentlemen, I am chengyuting, a sophomore who majors in textile engineering.At the first of my speech,I would like to introduce you a famous ancient song which goes like this : what a beautiful night is this ?Drifting down midstream of this river.What a graceful day is this? Same boat with the prince .So grateful for the fondness to meet with your gracious consent.I am thrilled and my heart beat like a hammer to even get to see you. My dear prince ,trees live on mountains and branches live on trees . There is my heart living for you,but you never know.Maybe some of you already know the name of this song,yeah ,it is exactly the song of yueren ,the very first translated song in Chinese history ,which is recorded in Chuci .
Jun 12, 2015 11:19 AM
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At the beginning of my speech would sound more natural.
June 12, 2015
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June 12, 2015
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Spanish
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English, Spanish