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is my English correct? The Lord is my teacher, He makes me stay awake in my studies all night; He leads me from page to page. He restores my sanity; He guides me in the path of conciousness, for my GRADES sake... even though I grow weary in the shadow of books,projects,assignments, activities,etc. I fear no deadline for submission/ test. for Thou art with me. Thy rod and Thy staff they keep jabbing me.... Thou wilt prepare a test for me in the presence of my classmates... THou hast crammed my mind with so much knowledge; my eyelids droop. Surely a good grade and a kind teacher will follow me after the test, or I will dwell in the class forever!
Sep 5, 2008 8:36 AM
Answers · 5
Yes it is correct & is based on the sacred hymn 'The Lord is my shepherd' which is usually sung at a funeral service.
September 6, 2008
yes, your english is very good, and i really like this poem
September 5, 2008
It is excellent.
September 5, 2008
That is pretty cool! I like it. It is creative. ^_^
September 5, 2008
Yes. Your English is fine.
September 5, 2008
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Filipino (Tagalog), Hebrew, Portuguese, Spanish
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Chinese (Mandarin), Hebrew, Portuguese, Spanish