I'm going to start out correcting your opening questions. Then I will answer your questions.
i wanna to shaw my writing her to cheack it, how? and i dont know how to use italki, wish help me
It's 'I want to show my writing for it to be corrected. How can I do that? Also I don't know how to use italki, can anyone help me?'
You can go to the Community link and go to Notebook and submit any writing to be corrected there. Asking italki in either Answers link or the Notebook link will help you use this web page. You can also explore the links to familiarize yourself with using italki.
I want to learn English to be better in the language, hop help my.
I want to learn English to write and speak the language, please help me.