kodachi
give your thoughts on this poem I wrote The sky was shaking......... with my sight focused on the ground insecurity was reigning (or raining) I lifted up my eyes, and reality was found just a small puddle in my life
Sep 16, 2008 1:08 PM
Answers · 3
Great.
September 16, 2008
good theme, if the order of some words changed, then how ...
September 17, 2008
Good! write some more.. But this time include the word darkness.. Or sorrow.. Thanks
September 16, 2008
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