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How to say "You shot me like a bullet with your smile" in Korean? Hello, I have to write a 3 line-poem but I'm still confused about ordering the sentence. So anyone can let me know how to say "You shot me like a bullet with your smile" in Korean? Thank you in advance! Ps. Using the word "탄환" in the sentence.
Dec 26, 2015 9:17 AM
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문법에 맞지 않거나 틀릴 수 있지 않나요? 상대방 입장에서 최대한 도와주려고 하는 마음이 중요하다고 생각합니다. I think that words should be understand with the mind of the other side.
December 26, 2015
I have to agree with Jake. First, you're using a simile which may sound strange in another language. Second, even your English sentence doesn't make sense. Think again what "shooting a bullet" actually means.
December 26, 2015
당신의 미소는 탄환이 되어 내 가슴을 뚫었습니다.
December 26, 2015
너의 그 미소에 총 맞은것 처럼 (recommend ) 너의 그 미소에 탄환이 들여박힌것 처럼(request)
December 26, 2015
That would sound very awkward.
December 26, 2015
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