Could you correct my TOEFL answer? And if you could, please teach me more native sentence.
I ofte go toFlorida and this place is very important to me for several reasons.
First of all, I like airplane and I want to get glider license. But I don't have enough money to get it in Japan. But in Florida, those fees got very very cheaper than my country. So I often go to that and try to get.
Another reason is Florida is worm temperature all year around. I like to play sports in outside, like badminton or lacrosse. Because I learned how to play these for 7 years. So I want to play it in good condition so that's why I often go to Florida.