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Takayama
Could you correct my TOEFL answer? And if you could, please teach me more native sentence. I ofte go toFlorida and this place is very important to me for several reasons. First of all, I like airplane and I want to get glider license. But I don't have enough money to get it in Japan. But in Florida, those fees got very very cheaper than my country. So I often go to that and try to get. Another reason is Florida is worm temperature all year around. I like to play sports in outside, like badminton or lacrosse. Because I learned how to play these for 7 years. So I want to play it in good condition so that's why I often go to Florida.
Jan 4, 2016 11:51 AM
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I would suggest that you place this in the Notebook for correction.
January 4, 2016
Takayama
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English