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melody
Is this sentence correct? I went on a trip to Beijing to a concert of my favorite band with my best friend in the first summer vocation of my college life.
Jan 16, 2016 7:30 AM
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You should post this as a Notebook, it is easier to correct ;-) The grammar is basically correct and you would be understood, but a more natural word order is: The first summer vacation of my college life, I went to Beijing with my best friend to see my favorite band in concert.
January 16, 2016
I went (on a trip ) to Beijing for a concert of my favorite band with my best friend during the first summer vacation I had while in college.
January 16, 2016
melody
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English