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Ian
which one of these 2 questions is well-written? relationships are affected by how do we kiss in modern society? or relationships are affected by how we kiss in modern society?
Jan 20, 2016 7:20 AM
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2nd one It's not a question, it's an embedded wh- clause, so you don't need an auxiliary By the way, I think it's better to put "in modern society" at the front of the sentence. Otherwise "kiss in modern society" looks like a single phrase (it's not: you mean "kiss + in modern society")...not sure if you see what I mean? In any case here's what I would write: "In modern society, relationships are affected by how we kiss"
January 20, 2016
Number 1 is wrong and number 2 is right. Number 2 would look better if you moved the phrase "in modern society" to the beginning of the sentence.
January 20, 2016
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