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are my corrections right? 2 Many students are not planning to return to their native’s countries. (wrong) Many students are not planning to return to their countries of origin. (right?) Students are offered different Master’s Programs that you can choose. (wrong) Different Master’s Programs are offered to students. (right?)
Jan 20, 2016 10:10 PM
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I would suggest these edits: "Many students are not planning to [or "planning not to", not quite the same thing] return to their own countries." "Many students are not planning to return to their countries of origin." "Students are offered different master’s programs that they can choose among." "Different master’s programs are offered to students."
January 20, 2016
Technically it sounds right. But to make it faster and more natural, I would say this: 1.) Many international students are not planning to return back home/ to their country. ( this is better than sentence 2) 2.) Many students are not planning to return to their original country.
January 20, 2016
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