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can someone correct me, to help improve my english ;) 1. It is clearly unacceptable that women should suffer nasty comments, sexual harassment or anything else. 2. In Silicon Valley, discussion beyond the stage gossip to go directly to the heart of the subject. 3. Let's face it: what puts oil in the wheels of this relational network, are the founders who succeeded and who dope adrenaline of new businesses, reinvest their money. 4. It is sometimes said that women who seek to be the equal of homes lack ambition, but it's just the opposite. 5. Flexible hours and telecommuting are the future solutions for young women who have to balance family and career.
Jan 26, 2016 6:06 PM
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1. It is clearly unacceptable that women should suffer nasty comments, sexual harassment or anything else. (GREAT) 2. In Silicon Valley, discuss beyond simple gossip to go directly to the heart of the subject. (MAYBE? I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND YOUR SENTENCE FULLY - IS IT AN INSTRUCTION?) 3. Let's face it: what oils the cogs of this network of relationships are the founders who succeeded (in what?) and who inject adrenaline into new businesses, reinvesting their money. (SEE CHANGES) 4. It is sometimes said that women who seek to be the equal of men lack ambition, but it's just the opposite. (SEE CHANGES) 5. Flexible hours and telecommuting are the future solutions for young women who have to balance family and career. (GREAT)
January 26, 2016
Torino
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English, French
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