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I wrote a retelling of Saki`s story "Tea".Checkplease,if there are any mistakes. This story tells us about a man named James ,who had always thought that he would get marry someday ,but he had done nothing for it.His relatives always pointed him about it with discontent .He liked and admired a great many women collectively and dispassionately without singling out one for especial matrimonial consideration.When his uncle (Jules) died and bequeathed him a comfortable little legacy,his relatives thought that it was the right time for him to get marry.They choose a girl for him named Joan Sebastable as his fiancee and he agreed.Everybody thought he would propose to her ,but on the way to her home he imagined how she was doing a tea ceremony and tea talks which he hated.He step by to his a sort of remote cousin Rhoda.Talks with her were more nice and enjoyable and he proposed to her.Relatives were really surprised about that because they didnt expect that.But,the thing,he dindnt like that much(tea ceremonies and talks about it)came to him after his homeymoon in Minorka.
Feb 1, 2016 1:56 PM
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This story tells us about a man named James ,who had always thought that he would get marry someday ,but he had done nothing ABOUT it.His relatives always pointed IT OUT TO HIM WITH discontent .He HAD liked and admired a great many OF women AT THE SAME TIME BUT ,dispassionately , without singling out one for SPECIAL matrimonial consideration.When his uncle (Jules) died and bequeathed him a comfortable little legacy,his relatives thought that it was the right time for him to get marry.They cHOSE a girl for him named Joan Sebastable as his fiancee, and he agreed.Everybody thought he would propose to her ,but on the way to her home, he imagined how sheWOULD DO a tea ceremony and THE tea talks , BOTH which he hateS..He WENT OVER TO his sort- of -remote cousin ,Rhoda AND HAD A CONVERSATION with her . IT WAS SO VERY PLEASENT and enjoyable TO HIM THAT he proposed to her.Relatives were really surprised BY IT because they didnt expect that.But,the thing,he DOESNTlike that much(tea ceremonies and talks about it)came to him after his homeymoon in Minorka.?? NEXT TIME , PLESAE POST IN YOUR NOTEBOOK FOR LONG CORRECTIONS. OVER THERE , WE HAVE TOOLS TO HELP YOU AND I.
February 1, 2016
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