Alex
Need smn to correct this. Thanks in advance! I'm going to write sentences with the words I've learned from "Essential English words 5" and some websites. I'd really apreciate if you correct any mistakes I have. Thanks in advance! PS: new words I'll highlight by writing them with CAPS LOCK mode. 1. My boss had AFFORDED me to take a one-week trip to Los Angeles. 2. The new plantes have ENRICHED the fauna of our area. 3. To mark the painting she has CARVED a name on top of it. 4. He was one of the HEIRS of the THRONE. 5. It was raining for three CONSECUTIVE days. 6. We MADE an agreement that I'll come to the office at 6 o'clock at the morning so I can PICK UP the necessary documents for visa. 7. He URGED his friend to go for a diner to the one of the most FASHIONABLE restaurant in the city. 8. Shark is one of the AQUATIC animal. 9. I have never seen such strange, BIZARRE thing. 10. I love drawing on COARSE paper. 11. Fruits DIGEST by our organisme in a few hours. other sentences: http://classic.italki.com/entry/663155
Feb 17, 2016 4:11 AM
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Hi Alex, Well done with these sentences! :) There were a few corrections needed, I've put ( ) around the corrections. See below :) 1. My boss had (offered) me to take a one-week trip to Los Angeles. 2. The new (plants-no 'e') have enriched the fauna of our area. 3. To mark the painting she has carved a name on top of it. (This is technically correct but I'm wondering if you meant 'sign' instead of 'mark', if so 'carved' would also change. If not, awesome work!) 4. He was one of the heirs (of/to - to is more common) the THRONE. 5. It was raining for three consecutive days. :D awesome 6. We made an agreement that I'll come to the office at 6 o'clock (in) the morning so I can pick up the necessary documents for (my/his/her/their) visa. 7. He urged his friend to go (to dinner) to one of the most (fashionable/popular) restaurant(s) in the city. 8. A shark is one of the aquatic animal(s). ('A shark in an aquatic animal.' would be more common.) 9. I have never seen such (a) strange, bizarre thing. 10. I love drawing on coarse paper. :) 11. Fruit digests in our organs(stomach) in a few hours. I hope this helped. :) Your sentences are great.
February 17, 2016
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