Is it true THAT slavery ended a long time ago? The answer is no. Even though we don't use the word slavery AT the present time, it STILL EXISTS but in another form. Today, discrimination against maids is increasing, and THEY ARE BEING TREATED MORE UNFAIRLY EVERY DAY. The unacceptable thing is the mistreatment and the discrimination against them as IF they are inferior to us! We should know it is not their fault THAT THEY are maids; their circumstances HAVE forced them to be so. Despite their hard work, they are treated badly like commodities and stones, not to mention the profanity they hear every day. For example, Noor, who is 22 years old, has BEEN TREATED BADLY (or abused) BY her employer. Whenever she ASKS him for her salary, which is LESS than 600 SR, he BEATS her. And before he GOES out of his house, he PUTS her in a SMALL, LONELY room. He believes that Noor is inferior to him and he FORGETS that we are all humans and we SHOULD ALL BE TREATED FAIRLY AND EQUALLY.
1. You are writing it in the present tense, so most verbs should be in the same tense.