Sina Afzal
mail to professor Is there any grammatical mistakes in the following letter which I'm going to send to my professor? Does it need any amendments? Dear professor XX; Back to our previous conversation, you gave me the opportunity to write a conference paper by comparing the results of experiments E5 and E7 from the doctoral dissertation of Dr. YY. As you are aware, I handed in a draft version of the paper within a week after your approval; however, at that time you ordered me to change some parts of the manuscript without exactly specifying them. After applying some changes, I've attached the revised script to this email. I understand that you are busy these days, but please let me know if it needs any amendments at your earliest convenience. sincerely; ZZ ****P.S. : I really need this email to be overly formal and without any mistakes. So I would appreciate any suggestions to improve the above script toward "perfection" :)
Apr 28, 2016 2:39 PM
Answers · 6
It's fine. It strikes a respectful tone but is not overly formal. He knows you're not a native speaker, so he isn't looking for perfection in an email.
April 28, 2016
Yep, it's ok. you can use for this kind of questions(you can install it as an extension if you are using Chrome)
April 28, 2016
'Regarding' is better than 'back to'.
April 28, 2016
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