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Please correct my sentences : This muffin is made with seeds, raison, and and carrots. :There are seeds, raison, and carrots inside this muffin. :How would you like to pay? Cash or card? :Wi-fi password is showed on the casher machine. :We are closed 7:00 pm on Monday to Friday. :We have milk and sugars on the crate counter. (What's it called where milk, sugar, and rids are placed? ) :It might have left a moment ago...we missed the train. :There should be the library around my work place. :We throw patisseries left the end of the day, and make new pastries to give fresh one.
25 ott 2016 14:24
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:How would you like to pay? Cash or card? :How would you like to pay? Cash or credit? :Wi-fi password is showed on the casher machine. :Wi-fi password is shown on the cashier machine. :We are closed 7:00 pm on Monday to Friday. :We close at 7:00 pm on Monday to Friday. :We have milk and sugars on the crate counter. :We have milk and sugar on the crate counter.
25 ottobre 2016
: This muffin is made with seeds, raison, and and carrots. * This muffin is made with sunflower seeds, raisins, and and carrots. (If you can, you should tell them what kind of seeds. Also, "raisins" has to be plural). :Wi-fi password is showed on the casher machine. * The Wi-fi password is printed on your receipt. ("receipt" is pronounced "ruh-SEET) :We are closed 7:00 pm on Monday to Friday. * We close at 7:00 PM Monday through Friday. :We have milk and sugars on the crate counter. (What's it called where milk, sugar, and rids are placed? ) * Cream and sweeteners are on the counter at the end. (I don't know what the counter is called. You should probably gesture in the direction of the counter). :We throw patisseries left the end of the day, and make new pastries to give fresh one. * We through leftover pastries away at the end of the day, and make fresh pastries each morning.
26 ottobre 2016
Lids, not rids
25 ottobre 2016
: This muffin is made with seeds, RAISINS, and and carrots. :There are seeds, RAISINS, and carrots inside this muffin. :How would you like to pay? Cash or card? :THE Wi-fi password is showN on the cashier machine. [cashier machine=cash register] :We are closed AT 7:00 pm Monday THROUGH Friday. [better "We close..."] :We have milk and sugars on *the counter*. (What's it called where milk, sugar, and rids are placed? ) [They are placed on the COUNTER or SHELF/SHELVES] :It might have left a moment ago...we missed the train. :There should be A library around my work place. :We throw AWAY PASTRIES THAT ARE left the end of the day, and make FRESH ONES.
25 ottobre 2016
It would be easier if put this in the Notebook section, Hiromi.
25 ottobre 2016
HIROMI
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