Community Web Version Now Available
Aimira
please rectify my sentence if heart doesn't stay in proper harbor, nowhere is housing
Nov 4, 2016 4:05 PM
7
0
Answers · 7
I'm not sure what you are trying to say, but I'll reword it into a few sentences that an English speaker would understand. "If your heart doesn't stay where it should, nowhere is home" "If your heart isn't in the right place, nowhere is home". "If your hear isn't in the proper harbor, you're not home". It isn't correct to say "nowhere is housing"...it should say "home is nowhere" or "nowhere is home". It's also incorrect to say "if heart...". It should be "if the heart..." or "if your/her/his heart". You should also use "the" before "harbor". I hope this helps.
November 4, 2016
thanks I got it
November 5, 2016
Hi Aimiraliang. It’s not incorrect to write “Please rectify my sentence”, but it sounds very formal and it’s not common. People would normally write “Please correct my sentence.”
November 4, 2016
HELLO
November 4, 2016
Aimira
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese, Spanish
Learning Language
English