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LilIan
does it sound natural? "it could not be denied that, though, any forms of punishments should be the opportunities for introspection, but not suffering." Is there any mistake in this sentence?
Nov 11, 2016 6:10 AM
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Should start the sentence with a capital, "It..."
November 11, 2016
Captilize your first word. And I think you don't need those commas.
November 11, 2016
Hi Eileen. This is a very formal sentence which would appear in print, but is unlikely to be in conversation. Just one error. Better to say "any forms of punishment"
November 11, 2016
LilIan
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