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Sarah
Is this pragraph blow right ? only our dreams that are keeping us alive when we lost it ,we lost the best part of our soul then lost the passion on life and became useless keep dreaming
Nov 18, 2016 5:12 PM
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Hi Sarah, This would be more grammatically correct, so I hope it is what you wanted to say. "When we lose the dreams that are keeping us alive, we lose the best part of our soul and then we lose the passion for life and become useful, so keep dreaming." Regards, Sinead
November 18, 2016
(You should post kind of question on notebook instead next time, to have people correct a passage :) ) I corrected it below: Is this paragraph below right? Only our dreams kept us alive when we lost it. We lost the best part of our souls, then lost the passion to live; we became useless. Keep dreaming.
November 18, 2016
some time we dream bad things
November 18, 2016
Sarah
Language Skills
Arabic (Egyptian), English, German
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English