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Is it Natural? I can't improve my English because of lack of time. All day long my son demands me carrying him in my arms plus I have to home school my daughter who us very lazy and it takes mule lots of effort make her study.
Nov 19, 2016 8:41 PM
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This is what I would say: "All day long, my son demands that I carry him in my arms. Plus, I have to homeschool my daughter who is very lazy and it takes a lot of effort to get her to study." Good job! Only a few minor errors, but it looks good. :) I don't usually spell "home school" as a separate word. Instead I spell it as, "homeschool". Though this is a minor issue.
November 19, 2016
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November 19, 2016
smelval
Language Skills
English, Russian
Learning Language
English