Could you please help me correct this translation? (Part 1 - For text, see part 2)
Hi! I'm trying to expand my Finnish vocabulary by doing some random songtext translation works, starting from songs of which I could easily find an already corrected Finnish version online. So, I chose "Angels fall first", by Nightwish. By the way, tell me what you think about language learning by song translation! :-)
Here is my translation, with the corrections I added by comparing my text with a Finnish version on Lyricstranslate - corrected forms after the slashes. Due to its length, I'll have to split my question in two parts. Please tell me which are the correct forms, and whether there is anything I should be aware of about syntax or word meanings. In the next part, I will put the translation.