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What I have errors? 1. The company is offering work experience students in their final year of school. 2. Looking after small children is a full-time occupation. 3. I’ve spent six months job - off but I’m still out of work. 4. She never went to university so she doesn’t have many clocking events (experience). 5. He’s very ambitious, so he’s hoping to climb the career ladder as quickly as possible. (to climb the career ladder) 6. If you’re good at organizing parties, you could work in 7. I’m hoping they’ll give me a permanent contract when I finish my three-month trial period. 8. She cleared her desk and locked the drawers before off. 9. I’m going to apply for as a sales assistant at the new shopping centre, which is opening soon.
Dec 12, 2016 4:21 AM
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What I have errors? What errors do I have? 1. The company is offering work experience students in their final year of school. 1. The company is offering work experience for/to students in their final year of school. 2. Looking after small children is a full-time occupation. 3. I’ve spent six months job - off but I’m still out of work. 3. I’ve spent six months unemployed and I’m still out of work. 4. She never went to university so she doesn’t have many clocking events (experience). - no idea, sorry 4. She never went to university so she doesn’t have much work experience. 5. He’s very ambitious, so he’s hoping to climb the career ladder as quickly as possible. (to climb the career ladder) "corporate ladder" is common. 6. If you’re good at organizing parties, you could work in <needs something here> 6. If you’re good at organizing parties, you could work in the party department. 6. If you’re good at organizing parties, you could work here. 7. I’m hoping they’ll give me a permanent contract when I finish my three-month trial period. 8. She cleared her desk and locked the drawers before off. 8. She cleared her desk and locked the drawers before leaving. 8. She cleared her desk and locked the drawers before going home. 8. She cleared her desk and locked the drawers before quitting. 9. I’m going to apply for as a sales assistant at the new shopping centre, which is opening soon. 9. I’m going to apply for a job as a sales assistant at the new shopping centre, which is opening soon. 9. I’m going to apply for work as a sales assistant at the new shopping centre, which is opening soon.
December 12, 2016
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