Are these sentences written correctly? 1 Ater work I swim in my pool in order to ease the stess that I gain in the work. 2 Do you still live in the same street? 3 Some people never tell what's going in their soul.
Dec 14, 2016 5:29 PM
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Hi Good attempt. All of your sentences make sense and I understood, however you can improve them just a little. 1. "After work I TAKE a swim in my pool, to HELP ease the stress from work. Or after work I GO for a swim in my pool, to HELP ease the stress from work. Watch your spelling on after, you can use TAKE or GO as a better way to express yourself. As we go for a swim or take a swim, just like we go for a walk or go to the gym. You can also use " in order to ease the stress" as you have done, my use of HELP is so it sounds a little less formal. As this is an informal sentence. 2. Good job. Just remember "Do you still live ON the same street?" This is because, we don't live IN a street literally, we live IN a house/flat/apartment ON a street. 3. " Some people never SAY what's going on in their soul" or " some people never say what's going on within themselves/inside." Use SAY as we SAY something when we speak. But we will TELL someone the time if they ASK. If there is a problem we SAY what it is and we TELL if we are asked. Hope this helps!
December 14, 2016
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