Calla Lily
In our rural area, the population density is lower than urban's. Hi there, could you please have a quick review if something doesn't make sense? 1. In our rural area, the population density is lower than urban's. 2. Basically, my hometown is not a popular place for tourists to visit, but there is a Zhaozhou Town near my home. Many tourists like to enjoy local famous ice dessert and worship historical temples at there. 3. Actually, I think it hasn't changed so much, there is a harbor near by our township, the local government has built many facilities and planned natural environments for tourists at there. Thank you so much for your assistance!
Feb 8, 2017 5:35 AM
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Hi there, could you please REVIEW THIS TO SEE if it makes sense? 1. In our rural area, the population density is lower than THAT OF URBAN AREAS. 2. GENERALLY, my hometown is not a popular place for tourists to visit, but Zhaozhou Town is near my home. Many tourists like to enjoy local famous ice dessertS and worship AT historic temples there. 3. I don't think MY HOMETOWN has changed much. There is a harbor near our township. The local government has built many facilities and developed natural environments for tourists TO VISIT there. Thank you so much for your assistance! YOU ARE WELCOME!
February 8, 2017
1. In our rural area, the population density is lower than urban areas. Or - The population density in our rural area is lower than in urban areas. 2. Basically, my hometown is not a popular place for tourists to visit, but there is a Zhaozhou Town near my home. Many tourists like to enjoy a famous local ice dessert and worship at the historic temples there. 3. Actually, I think it hasn't changed very much. There is a harbor near our township, the local government has built many facilities and has planned natural environments for tourists there. It was quite good. Well done.
February 8, 2017
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