Is this correct?
I wrote a notebook entry and even though more than 10 people viewed it, no one has corrected it. Is it written well? Or is it too confusing to correct?
Please assist. ^^
This morning, while making breakfast, it started raining. My dog hates the rain, but she had to go to the bathroom. So, I went outside with my dog. But...what a surprise! My umbrella wasn't there! Outside, the rain was cold. Of course, my dog didn't want to go outside (anymore), since it was raining. Jeez, why won't you go to the bathroom? Don't you want to go? Anyway, we came back inside. My breakfast got cold. Now, I don't want to eat it anymore.