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Life experiences A:I've been in a few relationships before you. B:what was the most important?A:the last maybe.I was so heartbroken when she broke up with me,but I haven't been dumbed by them all I broke up with a few because things weren't working." Could you tell me if I made some mistakes,it just doesn't sound right to me. I don't know why.
Oct 27, 2017 7:50 PM
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Please note the corrections to your punctuation. You have punctuated like a Chinese person! Always put a space after any comma or full stop/period.
October 28, 2017
A:I've been in a few relationships before you. B:Which one was the most important? A:The last maybe. I was so heartbroken when she broke up with me. I haven't been dumped by all of them. I broke up with a few because things weren't working.
October 27, 2017
Butterfly
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