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Please, check the letter and give your opinion about it. If it's possible correct my mistakes. Dear Mary, Thanks for your letter. I’m sorry, I haven’t written for such a long time, but I was very busy with my studies. As you know, I’m studying economics at University and I’m in my third year. I’m trying to study well to become a good specialist in the field of economics. So I usually spend a lot of time doing my homework. However, I believe that it’s worth it. All my spare time I spend with my family. I thought that you must be interested to know that last Sunday we went outside and had a picnic in the park. I had a time of my life. Moreover, I took a lot of beautiful pictures. I sent you some of them. Your opinion is very important for me, because I know that you are an excellent photographer. Unfortunately, I need to go. Hope to hear from you. Best wishes, Stasya
Nov 17, 2017 3:56 PM
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Dear Mary, Thanks for your letter. I’m sorry, I haven’t written for such a long time, but I was very busy with my studies. As you know, I’m studying economics at University and I’m in my third year. I’m trying to study well to become a **specialist** in the field of economics. So I usually spend a lot of time doing my homework. However, I believe that it’s worth it. *For* all my spare time, I spend *it* with my family. I *was thinking* that you must be interested to know that last Sunday we went outside and had a picnic in the park. I had *the* time of my life. Moreover, I took a lot of beautiful pictures. I sent you some of them. Your opinion is very important *to* me, because I know that you are an excellent photographer. Unfortunately, I need to go. Hope to hear from you. Best wishes, Stasya **You can't say "good" specialist, specialists are already good Good job!!
November 17, 2017
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