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Amylene
is this ok? please correct me if there are any mistakes 생일 진심으로 축하해! 태어나줘서 고맙고 항상 좋은 노래 만들어줘서 들려줘서 고마워. 오늘 맛있는거 많이 먹고 세상에서 제일 행복한 하루 보내길 바래. 아프지 말고 늘 건강하길!!
Nov 20, 2017 3:19 PM
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It looks perfect but I would just put "그리고" between 만들어줘서 and 들려줘서.
November 20, 2017
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Yes that's good as well.
November 21, 2017
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English, Filipino (Tagalog), Korean
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