Yoshinori Shigematsu
Expressions I might need revising 1. In Western films before this era, when a character was shot, they would just place their hand on it and collapse. 2. At the end, they are machine-gunned to the death with 160 bullets. 3. This was actually the first film in the history of cinema that ever showed blood when a character was shot. It would be great if you could give some corrections.
Nov 23, 2017 6:14 AM
Answers · 2
1. They would just place their hand on what? The (gun-shot) wound. (...) they would just place their hand on their wound BEFORE they collapsED. 2. Machine-gunned to death. You can leave 'the' out. The rest of the text is correct. :) My advice is to make this post an entry on ITalki instead of a question. That way I can mark, correct, comment and change things in your text easily.
November 23, 2017
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Yoshinori Shigematsu
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