Yljaha
Is it right? Meeting with Tom was so wonderful. As usual! We made presents for him, he made presents for us. We tried a Jaljeera. For some of us it was a real challenge to drink this salted and spicy Indian lemonade. However somebody drank 3 glasses of the drink in row. For that tough guy it seemed just a refreshing choice in hot summer day. We told everybody legends about Krishna and Radha, about their unconditional love, about Ganesha, the elepahnt-headed best-known and most worshipped deities in the Hindu pantheon. Of course, Tom was happy to hear free-style melodies from young, bold and talanted musicians. Then we drunk tea with something delicious. Soan papdi is a popular Indian dessert, it has a crisp and flaky texure. Its taste reminds halva and cotton candy at the same time. Its main ingredients are sugar, gram flour, flour, ghee, milk, and cardamom. It was relaxing atmosphere to meet old friends, to chat to each other and even to paint hands with henna.
Aug 13, 2018 10:33 AM
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Hi Yljaha, I think it is better to say drink in a row and you don't need to say ''drink'' again. `However, somebody drank 3 glasses in a row`. Then we drunk tea is wrong. ''Then you drank'' because it is simple past. It was ''a'' relaxing atmosphere to meet ''with'' old friends. You should put an ''a'' before the adj relaxing and I think ''meeting with'' is better because it was a planned activity. Cheers! Ozgur
August 13, 2018
You had some basic grammar mistakes which I corrected. It was a bit long so I'm not able to give a full discussion on why certain elements were wrong. Meeting with Tom was so wonderful as usual! We made presents for him and he made presents for us. We tried a Jaljeera. For some of us it was a real challenge to drink this salted and spicy Indian lemonade. However, someone drank 3 glasses in row. For that tough guy it seemed like it was just a refreshing choice on a hot summer day. We told each other legends about Krishna and Radha, about their unconditional love, as well as about Ganesha, the elephant-headed deity who is one of the best-known and most worshipped within the Hindu pantheon. Of course Tom was happy to hear free-style melodies from young, bold and talented musicians. Afterwards, we drank tea with something delicious . Soan papdi is a popular Indian dessert with a crisp and flaky texture. Its taste reminds one of halva and cotton candy at the same time. Its main ingredients are sugar, gram flour, flour, ghee, milk, and cardamom. It was a relaxing atmosphere to meet old friends, to chat with each other, and even to paint hands with henna.
August 13, 2018
…..drank tea
August 13, 2018
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