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Contract English? In addition to the above said nonperformance applicable for specific responsibilities for breach of contract, on every other nonperformance of the debtor and the warrantor, the creditor may ask the debtor and the warrantor to pay a penal sum of 5% of the loan amount under this article. Hi. Could you please check this sentence? Thank you.
Aug 18, 2018 2:53 AM
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This is very old fashioned contractual language, a style which is hard to follow and hard to correct. I would suggest starting again and writing it in plainer English; is this not possible?
August 18, 2018
Check it for what? It's not really English in the normal sense, as you suggest in the title. . Difficult enough to know what it should mean if correct. . Seems to state a purpose. I do wonder, though, how do you count nonperformances, as you can get another 5% for each new one that you identify.
August 18, 2018
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