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mengsicheng
How to improve this sentence? Thank you very much. A reception building has been added in the middle of the island and its northern direction is located a restaurant, while a pier has been built to the south of the reception for docking boats.
Aug 21, 2018 11:49 AM
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An IELTS map, isn't it? Anyway, my suggestion is as follows: A reception building has been put up in the middle of the island; additionally, a pier for docking boats and a restaurant have been built, to the south and to the north of the reception, correspondingly.
August 21, 2018
I would create 2 sentences. A reception building has been added to the middle of the island. There is a restaurant to the north and a pier, to the south, for docking boats.
August 21, 2018
mengsicheng
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Chinese (Mandarin), English
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English