your English is actually quite good, based on what you have written. My parents were Irish, so have a soft spot for the place - but be aware that if you learn English there you are likely to pick up the Irish accent, which is quite distinctive. But each British English speaking territory has its own accent - Australia, New Zealand, South Africa, Scotland.........sometimes it is slight and other times so thick that it is barely understandable, even to a native English speaker from somewhere else.