Are the sentences below grammatically correct? Do they make sense? If not, could you correct them?
When I casually turned on the TV and watched Princess Kako giving a speach in English,
I found her speaking skills were not as fluent as returnee students'.
However, I love her English because such students sound like native English speakers, not Japanese.
Do you think I am partial to her?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_wpdx-5iDNw
This is her speach.