I changed my wording , is my sentence ok now ?
CRICKET : MALE : 10% , WOMEN 2 %
SOCCER : MALE 24 %, WOMEN 6%
in Cricket and soccer, The percentages of males, at 10% and 24% respectively, were nearly 4 times higher than those of female players
Is it correct ?
I want to create a structure that can compare 4 percentages at once