I changed my wording , is my sentence ok now ?
SUMMARY :
CRICKET : MALE : 10% , WOMEN 2 %
SOCCER : MALE 24 %, WOMEN 6%

in Cricket and soccer, The percentages of males, at 10% and 24% respectively, were nearly 4 times higher than those of female players

Is it correct ?
I want to create a structure that can compare 4 percentages at once

Question

I changed my wording , is my sentence ok now ?
SUMMARY : 
CRICKET : MALE : 10% , WOMEN 2 %
SOCCER : MALE 24 %, WOMEN 6%

in Cricket and soccer, The percentages of males, at 10% and 24% respectively, were nearly 4 times higher than those of female players

Is it correct ? 
I want to create a structure that can compare 4 percentages at once

Answer

The percentage of males in cricket and soccer stands at 10 and 24 percent, making it nearly 4 times higher than that of female players.

Answer

The percentage of males players in cricket and soccer at 10 and 24 percentage respectively is nearly four times higher than the female players .