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can someone correct this text for me plz? Hello everyone, I will be grateful if someone correct this text; Social media at home and at school Today, everyone is using social media everytime and everywhere. It made a part of our daily activities./( It become our daily habit.) I’m also one of them who is busy on social midia, but not too much. I usually use What’sApp, imo, tumblr and Telegram. I post some storys and photo’s on them and regularly chat with my family and friends. Beside of them I use some Apps for learning langauges, like italki and speaky. I build thier new frieds for over the world to practies languags and improve my skill. And also I post some discussions and notes. I sometimes give comments on their posts and like their pictures and storys. I help some people who want to learn my natieve language. i will write the rest of this text to an other Guestion, cuz I'm not able to write more than 1000 words here in this platform. advance thanks regards, Sash❤
Sep 23, 2018 12:41 AM
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Social media at home and school Everyone nowadays uses social media all the time and everywhere. It makes a huge part of our daily activities./( It is becoming a daily habit.) <---The one in the parentheses seems more fit. I consider myself one of them as I'm always kind of busy on social media. I usually use WhatsApp, IMO, Tumblr, and Telegram. I post some stories and photos there and chat with my family and friends regularly. Besides that, I use many applications for learning languages like italki and Speaky. I have made new friends there from all over the world to practice languages and improve skills. Also, I post discussions and notes. I, sometimes, comment on their posts and like their pictures and stories. Moreover, I help people who want to learn my native language. I will write the rest of the text in another question since I'm not able to write more than 1000 word here on this platform. Thanks in advance.
September 23, 2018
ok i will do it
September 23, 2018
Nanren888- 新西兰 Not in the discussion, but in the Notebook section.
September 23, 2018
Easier in discussions, as there there are tools for corrections.
September 23, 2018
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