approval request
Approval request for receiving loan from other parties ino. Starway limited.

notes:
client name is starway limited
it has been offered additional loan from other bank

Question

approval request
Approval request for receiving loan from other parties ino. Starway limited.

notes:
client name is starway limited
it has been offered additional loan from other bank

Answer

is my grammar already correct ? thanks

Answer

So what exactly is the question?